In Love...

A short description of what being in love feels like

In every waking moment 

Nothing else matters

Like an 

Overdosing, never ending 

Virus 

Every waking moment it lingers with you and never goes away 

Reviews

[aj milton]

an impression of simplicity and yet your construction is very clever... and oh so true

[Michelle Farren]

Thank you!!! I have not been on here in a long time but I appreciate your feedback :)

[Latifa]

what a description that matches perfectly to the destined feeling of love, lovely dear.

[Michelle Farren]

Wow I haven't been on my account in a long time, I'm not sure if you're still active on here but I greatly appreciate your positive comment :)

[1Disawsum]

Nice work girl! Love this acrostic poem, I find it quite difficult to make one as good as this. Well done! And the words flow and make sense, even better! :)

[Michelle Farren]

Thank you ! I know you can do this if you put your mind to it, being in a quiet place always helps the words flow through my mind onto the paper (:

[Wall Hermitt]

It is unrealistic that such little piece can render me massively speechless. Yet here I am unable to demonstrate the positivity I see in the poem. I'll just state the obvious then - Amazing write.

[Michelle Farren]

Thank you, your reply was beautifully written i can tell just from it that you have great writing skills as well (:

[Jaleel Amayur]

your poem has got the rhythm of heartbeat.

[Michelle Farren]

It shall beat on through my pieces ! Thank you (:

[Anahat]

wow...this was awesome and very creative...Cheers!
Keep writing..
Regards Anahat :)

[Michelle Farren]

thank you Anahat i appreciate your kind words (:

[Stefanie Holmes]

I love coming across creative pieces like this one. :) I enjoyed it!

~Stefanie

[Michelle Farren]

Thank you i'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[Daydreamer]

Love the portray of how a lover can be profoundly intoxicated from being so bound with his love story.
Good demonstration skills ;)

[Michelle Farren]

I always appreciate your feedback (:

[Justin]

very well put together!!! liked how it was set up, that was really awesome!!!!

[Michelle Farren]

thank you Justin (:

[Justin]

your welcome michelle!!!! keep it up :)

[cloud]

Well deduced bit of poetry. Love can indeed be like a virus but perhaps a type of affliction is more appropriate being a virus goes away. Nevertheless, this is done really well and is worth a 100 from me.

[Michelle Farren]

Thank you i really appreciate the feed back (: i do agree you made a good point because viruses do eventually go away !