.... freedom

... with freedom comes sin
... with sin comes guilt
... with guilt comes death
... with death comes freedom

Reviews

[SachEngaged]

The Circle of life. I understand this as 'dont be afraid to achieve what you want no matter the scary path it takes.'

[barleygirl]

I love this. So many times people are afraid to go down a certain somewhat scary path becuz death might be involved. But sometimes we have to pick a path that walks us thru death, which gets us to real business of freedom. Your poem is a hundred times more multi-layered than it looks (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris]

An "interesting" circular view...