A walk

Sunlight sparkles colours off the dew drops 
The air is fresh and clean
Leaves are green and vibrant
There's not a soul to be seen
Each step i take is springy
Each turn a new surprise
How I often wonder
How people miss this with their eyes
Time escapes this place 
A piece of heaven just for me
I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly  free 

Reviews

[Bare trees]

You've captured a time when you were appreciative of nature and all its details. There is a spiritual side to it and you caught it through the use of words that brought the feeling for us all to share, if only for a short time. Wonderful poetry Michelle.

[R J Askew]

'Only here am I truly free' is the line for me. I think that way about writing, both reading what others write and myself writing. I also like 'Each step I take is springy' as it is just so positive.

[Babe Roxx]

A lovely write, Michelle...nature has a way like that with the human spirit.

[Wondering Mind]

a lovely walk this takes the reader on...

[Priscilla Sayers]

So often we forget how nature brings us freedom. Freedom in the realization that we are connected to all things around us. A wonderful depiction and honest piece.

[Patrick]

a gentle piece and kindly tone to these words - giving to the reader a glimpse of what you saw. Liked this

[Tate Morgan]

Beautiful really good i like the story and can easily relate tO IT i FIND PEACE IN NATURE AS WELL

[Forest Green]

Made me smile...absolutely. Sweetly written and the place you tell of must truly be magical.

Nothing like a walk amongst the trees, the lake, the pond...beauties of nature.

Nicely rhymed and so enjoyable to read...!

[koty bell]

wow that was amazing great work

[Muse]

You've captured a spring-like moment....that I try so hard to NEVER take for granted. It's during these little moments of bliss, that are eyes are really open....