A walk

A walk

A Poem by MichelleClay

Sunlight sparkles colours off the dew drops 
The air is fresh and clean
Leaves are green and vibrant
There's not a soul to be seen
Each step i take is springy
Each turn a new surprise
How I often wonder
How people miss this with their eyes
Time escapes this place 
A piece of heaven just for me
I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly  free 

© 2012 MichelleClay


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You've captured a time when you were appreciative of nature and all its details. There is a spiritual side to it and you caught it through the use of words that brought the feeling for us all to share, if only for a short time. Wonderful poetry Michelle.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nature is so full of wonderful gifts. This is a lovely poem with such a positive gait to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by :) I love nature, you can probably tell!
You make your walk very real with your words, I can almost see you kicking those leaves around and brushing passed the branches. I find walking frees my mind and sometimes brings on writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

I totally agree :) I wrote a book because of the magic of those woods :) thanks for the review
yes, the times we are alone with nature...it is a time to appreciate the beauty, it is also the time for introspection without distraction.

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people miss a lot with their eyes, they miss a lot more with their hearts...

did you mean "roam these woods"?

nice writing, you write with intense feeling and honesty.

Posted 12 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Sorry for the delay is saying thanks! Yes I did mean 'roam' thanks I will change it :)
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

Michelle, no need for the apology, but thanks...i know we sporadically get on these sites---
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Very beautiful! I felt like I was there.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely Michelle. Poets not only have different hearts but different senses all the way around. We see the world through different eyes. You articulate that well here. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i feel , i'm in the poem.. in the woods! soothing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think u r really talented also u write beautifully keep it up

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have brought us a piece of heaven just for me too.
Thanks for the favor.
Fabulous write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've captured a time when you were appreciative of nature and all its details. There is a spiritual side to it and you caught it through the use of words that brought the feeling for us all to share, if only for a short time. Wonderful poetry Michelle.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautifully done poem about nature.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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MichelleClay

Bedfordshire, United Kingdom



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