A walk

A walk

A Poem by MichelleClay

Sunlight sparkles colours off the dew drops 
The air is fresh and clean
Leaves are green and vibrant
There's not a soul to be seen
Each step i take is springy
Each turn a new surprise
How I often wonder
How people miss this with their eyes
Time escapes this place 
A piece of heaven just for me
I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly  free 

© 2012 MichelleClay


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You've captured a time when you were appreciative of nature and all its details. There is a spiritual side to it and you caught it through the use of words that brought the feeling for us all to share, if only for a short time. Wonderful poetry Michelle.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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What a freedom with your senses overflowing with beauty, and yes, one that too many miss in the rush of life... Each morning and night I walk to a river down from my house, and I feel that wonder awaken from your words... Thank you for letting me glimpse that moment anytime... May you find this piece of heaven every day, dear poet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I understand this poem. Good to wander into the forest. Allowed us to think and escape the city and real life. Good description create good visions of a long and peaceful walk. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


just simply beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


P. Kapper

11 Years Ago

My sentiments exactly
Reminds me of running through the woods, one of my favourite things. Thanks for this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by x
OOoo I know the feeling :) I really love it so much :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Glad you can relate :)
Very beautiful and light feeling. To explore nature, take in all that she has to offer, experince her magnificent art...no better way to spend a day. very nicely done. This poem has a very easy feel to it, refreshing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it :)
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Joe
Whow It Is Beautiful :)

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"I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly free" / Hmmmmm Lovely Lines! I Love It! :)

So Lovely Michelle!
Enjoyed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the sweet review x

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MichelleClay
MichelleClay

Bedfordshire, United Kingdom



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