My secret

A private dedication . . .

He is the light you'll never see That shines beautifully within He can heal the wounds of war And relieve you of your sin He requires nothing, he needs no reward.  Angels that have fallen are not meant to be adored.  But he will always have my heart In this world and the next hell and heaven can't deny me  For it is my free will to give if only he knew,   he is the reason why I live.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

What an eloquent, lifting dedication... one that shows from where your true beauty and inspiration flow from... May the world discover your secret and find release from their sin and the pain of horrid wars that rage... Living life abundantly is beyond compare, dear poet...

[Tate Morgan]

Oh so very nice

[STAR CHILD]

wow i can feel the power through this

[Ragin Cajun]

Wow, really powerful poem. I enjoyed it.

[Jackson_Yang]

A testament to how strong your faith can be. To all we love, everything is meant to be.

[J Todd Underhill]

An astounding testimony unto your faith, our faith if you will. I loved the read and shall be reading more as well. Great introductory poem to get to know you with!

[Forest Green]

A wonderful tribute to someone very dear. Nicely penned, and very apparantly sincere. May your life be filled with such reciprocating devotion...!

Charming and sweet...;)

What a good and beautiful picture of true love, you captured here. With less words, just great poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the positive feel of this poem. We need to hold to hope and belief. Life can be empty for a person who believe in nothing. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote