Creation

All uniquely special, most of us would agree

But there is just so much, that we simply do not see

Look past your fears, fights and fun

Now see who’s the insignificant one,

For just look at the moon, stars and the sun.

Reviews

[AngelAfterlife]

very short but beautiful.. i love it :)

[Ken Yen]

short and sweet. i love the rhythm and the rhyme. when you see my avatar you can know that i know what you mean ;)

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Awesome, love this

[Forest Green]

Dewdrop poetry...truly divine...;)

[jhed]

they are indeed special.
without them what would the days, months, years, and whatever hour would be?
i like though short. keep it going :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you made your point. Your words are true. The moon, stars and the sun are the way we focus on direction and life. Their important are necessary for us to dream and live. A excellent poem.
Coyote