A prayer

A prayer

A Poem by MichelleClay
"

True love is painful and requires sacrifice

"

Dear lord.

please give me the strength not to love him. Please free me from this hell of his face, his smell his effect on me. I beg you banish the memories forever, wipe him from my mind. And help me to see sense that this love is one sided and will never be the dream i desperately cling on to.
Make me strong enough to forget him, to not contact him and to be happy for his choice - which was not me. For true love means I wish him to be happy, so please make his dreams come true.

Amen

© 2013 MichelleClay


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Sometimes we really need that prayer. Wonderfully said :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :)
I like the emotion and trueness of this. This is a well done letter/prayer that is so common...but you bring this to life for your readers.

((The man in this write is an idiot though!))

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Ha ha thanks for your kind words x
soliloquy

11 Years Ago

This was nice the second time too. You are a great writer Michelle.
MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kyle :) oh sylis is on kindle :)
This piece perfectly ventilates your emotion.
I feel it is ok.

Posted 11 Years Ago


zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
What is your state of mind now?
Have you been pacified after writi.. read more
MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

I'm a lot better thank you. It certainly helped. :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very happy and relaxed to learn this. :)
The divine prayer for the boon to "let go"
Seeking Happiness for another, while your tear drops at your door,
Tis selfless sacrifice will make you stronger much before you know...

Posted 11 Years Ago


MichelleClay

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review x
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

yes..in a few words

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