Gravel

I wrote this when I was really upset and frustrated with someone. Grr, mean person!

Facing a stone wall
Cold, hard, and gray
Impossible to move around
Impossible to climb over

 

Holding my ground
Stubborn and determined
Frustrated and infuriated
Broken and alone

 

But the wall still stands
The only thing crumbling

Is me
 

Reviews

[TLK]

I wonder if you will ever come back to read a review of a poem from 4 years ago on an account that you left behind 4 years ago.

TIME WILL TELL.

[Acropolix]

Nice description, expresses your frustration very well so. Though you could choose some different words in the second stanza. Instead of 'frustrated and infuriated'. Would show more creativity and imagery if you were to choose synonyms for these words, since they are quite obvious regarding your own explanation. Furthermore, the title of the poem is somewhat strange as you are not focusing entirely on the ground but more on the wall which is blocking your path. So perhaps you could give the title another thought. Anyways, I hope I'm not sounding too much a snob! Good job and keep the writing going!