evil boyfriend

Every time I hear your name

f*****g chills run up my spine        

Thinking of nights when it rained

in my room, starting at nine

 

 

You took the hope from my hand        

smashed it to pieces, entirely broken

like a rock crumbling in the sand

gone for eternity.... forever stolen

 

 

The good i saw in your coffee eyes

oozes out when i hear your words

evolving into bleeding, devilish lies

The scars you made shouldn't have occurred

 

 

A disguised angel tore my heart

clawed it open, violently ripping

our eyes meet, yet so far apart

one last breath, now tragically slipping

 

 

As I lay here peacefully still

he gazes down for one last touch

but I don't want it, you..i want to kill

It had to end because it was all to much...

 

Reviews

[Poetic Tuesday]

This is so sad, but beautiful!

[Dennis Shanaberg]

The title made me think "oh no! what's this going to be?" But this was actually a very good piece. Full of hard emotion and vivid imagery. An excellent job. Keep it up

[WriterMe]

Oh beautifully worded. It was evil alright with hints of sarcasm and satire. Very well written =]
Good job!

-Niki