i say

i say i  am fine

but im going insane

i say i feel good

but i am in a lot of pain

i say its nothing

but its really a lot

i say i am okay

but really im not

Reviews

[Paege]

I like this poem because, partialy, it is short and sweet. The other part is that i can relate. You put it out there in a way that was nice to read, great write.

[A]

I'm sure a lot of people do this. I know I do sometimes. You just want to be left alone or don't want people to worry so you don't tell people how you really feel. This poem is very relateable. Well written. Great poem! :)

[Mioki]

Although short, I liked this poem. It had a nice rhyme scheme going, and the message was evident. Your writing strikes me as honest and sincere. There isn't a need for many metaphors or similes in this poem, because this piece expresses the feelings simply and honestly. That, in its own way, is beautiful. Thank you for sharing this write.