me

i am not perfect

.i will annoy you.

tick you off.

say stupid things

then take them back.

but put all that aside

you will never find a girl

that cares and loves

u as much as me

Reviews

[Mioki]

This doesn't seem to be a poem, but more like a thought. None the less, it was still well written in my opinion. Like I wrote last time, this piece is honest. If there's something I look for in poetry, it's honesty and true feelings; you've got that going in your work. Some of the color in this piece is a bit hard to read, but that doesn't taint the effect of your poem. Great job on this one also; I'm liking your poetry.