love

    Love is like playing

            the piano.

    frist you must learn

    to play by the rules,

   then you must forget

            the rules

                                     and play with your heart.

Reviews

[Mioki]

This is a very sweet, and dare I say, true poem. I like the simile you've used, because it isn't hackneyed, but seems to be purely yours alone. Love really is like a piano, and we must learn the rules and then break them. Every last one, that's the game of love after all. Anyways, I really enjoyed this write. I think this shall be going in my favorites, thank you for sharing.

[Fallin Angel]

OMFG LOVE IT

[..R.I.P..]

OMG!!!! LOVE IT!!! I should so totally have my boyfriend read it, or I should read it to him!!! Awesome write. :)
~PJ

[Tori]

This is awesome! I know i may not be able to give a very deep, heartfelt comment like this person, but still. It's awesome.

[bluessadmood]

God thats so sweet ..only i always known there are no rules before and after,ha ha
If you want to love ,you should forget all the rules,you should know there are no rules
You should be ready if it takes you where ever,you may wonder the streets
you may never know your sleeps ,your nights will never be as comfy as before
your days will be dreaming them all the time,you mind will never be yours again
you life so well organized before may turn to like a long lovely torture
If you came to see all this ,then you know its love..
lovely write..