this feeling

i know that i have a feeling inside,

but i only get it when i am with you 

when i am with u it is like there is nobody around,

it is only me and you

i think i have fallin for you

but i don't know what is happening

i have this feeling inside

i think it is love

Reviews

[Rosee]

very nice!

[An owl on the moon]

A very soft, beautiful expression of the indescribable... the feeling of love... Amazing...

[Crazy Cat Man]

I wish i was in love again. I miss that feeling :) great little piece

[Marlena]

I like this, sometimes short poems are the best ^^ You should fix your grammar though, it takes away from the feelings in it. :)

[Pookie]

Awesome!!! Poem. It's short smiple and to the point. I loved it.

[Yuffi (hat)]

AWSOME POEM

[Jade (insanity)]

I really liked it...
You might want to add a little detail...
But not much...
It is short and simple...
It was awesome!
Keep writing!
-Nightmare