A Love Poem
A Poem by
Michael Thrower
Such a mysterious force, love.
Just one glace was all
I had;
Thoughts of you were
truly bad.
Beauty all around; that
glow;
Smile that could win a
show.
Visage like a painter’s
mind;
Hair like music and a
rhyme.
Shining like the sun
above;
Voice that sings a song
of love.
Steps of grace and
harmony;
Perfume like the autumn
trees.
Eyes of fire and the
sea;
All in all you have won
me.
© 2014 Michael Thrower
Reviews
It's been a while since you wrote this. How do you feel now?
Posted 1 Month Ago
This is just beautiful awseome write love it! Keep writing
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is just beautiful awseome write love it! Keep writing
This was lovely, and playful, and visual, and sound. I very much liked the line- "Visage like a painter’s mind;", visage is a kick a*s word and was perfect in this description.
It's been far to long since I've read your work!
Posted 9 Years Ago
This was lovely, and playful, and visual, and sound. I very much liked the line- "Visage like a painter’s mind;", visage is a kick ass word and was perfect in this description.
It's been far to long since I've read your work!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Love is a funny thing, you never know who, how, when, where, why, or what.. it comes in all shapes, forms, sizes, and afflicts in different ways.. this is quite the tale of being bitten... well done... it is sweet and full of majestic imagery.. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Love is a funny thing, you never know who, how, when, where, why, or what.. it comes in all shapes, forms, sizes, and afflicts in different ways.. this is quite the tale of being bitten... well done... it is sweet and full of majestic imagery.. :)
I absolutely love this. The emotions overflow. Very well written.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I absolutely love this. The emotions overflow. Very well written.
Love the mystery you have pondered here Michael, that second stanza is stellar.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Love the mystery you have pondered here Michael, that second stanza is stellar.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Frieda.
Sight, smell, hearing, feeling.. This poem touches all the senses..
Posted 10 Years Ago
Sight, smell, hearing, feeling.. This poem touches all the senses..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 21, 2014
Last Updated on August 21, 2014
Tags:
dream ,
dreaming ,
sleep ,
nocturnal ,
poetry ,
tolkien ,
parallel ,
stars ,
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night ,
sun ,
clouds ,
day ,
peace ,
funny ,
irish ,
poem ,
pipe ,
woman ,
lady ,
skirt ,
travel ,
realm ,
star ,
galaxy ,
space ,
earth
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Michael Thrower Azeroth, GA
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22 years old and a student at a community college. For now. I love reading and writing fantasy and fiction. I'm hoping that by using this site, I'll learn to become a better author and reader. If you ..
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