wow Michael! This was a very gripping poem. I was sucked in during the very first line and felt myself living the poem as I was reading it. I saw everything- the expressions, emotions of confusion, smugness, fear, shock, I saw the dark surrounding, the darker hood. And oh my goodness that ending was great! I couldn't see it coming! Very original idea and piece, and- of course- very well written as usual. Great job!
God bless:)
~Mickey
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much! It's been so long since I've heard from you D: I'm glad to see you're still on he.. read moreThank you so much! It's been so long since I've heard from you D: I'm glad to see you're still on here :) Thank you again for taking the time to review this
10 Years Ago
I know right! D: ugh school's been ridiculous haha but I'm still here:) No problem at all! This was .. read moreI know right! D: ugh school's been ridiculous haha but I'm still here:) No problem at all! This was great:)
A journey of twists and turns rants in this poem. I love the closing line "Seeing as I was on the last page." Your destination still unknown just as a poem doesn't deserve a clarifying answer.
Very nice! I loved it! So mysterious and balanced, I felt as if I were there! Really wished it didn't end with a cliffhanger but those are the ones that send you a rush of adrenaline!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Lol thank you! I love that sort of tease-ending, and I've gotten some requests to continue on. Maybe.. read moreLol thank you! I love that sort of tease-ending, and I've gotten some requests to continue on. Maybe I will, who knows. Thanks for the review :)
wow Michael! This was a very gripping poem. I was sucked in during the very first line and felt myself living the poem as I was reading it. I saw everything- the expressions, emotions of confusion, smugness, fear, shock, I saw the dark surrounding, the darker hood. And oh my goodness that ending was great! I couldn't see it coming! Very original idea and piece, and- of course- very well written as usual. Great job!
God bless:)
~Mickey
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much! It's been so long since I've heard from you D: I'm glad to see you're still on he.. read moreThank you so much! It's been so long since I've heard from you D: I'm glad to see you're still on here :) Thank you again for taking the time to review this
10 Years Ago
I know right! D: ugh school's been ridiculous haha but I'm still here:) No problem at all! This was .. read moreI know right! D: ugh school's been ridiculous haha but I'm still here:) No problem at all! This was great:)
Nice representation of the cloaked, hooded figure nobodyt ever wants to see! I am going to assume that figure is Death, given the physical description and the words "I was on the last page"?
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
It could have been anything. Death, an angel, a demon, just a normal man, a brother, or even the cha.. read moreIt could have been anything. Death, an angel, a demon, just a normal man, a brother, or even the character from his past life. It can be anything. That's why it's so great and mysterious. To be honest, I wouldn't not want to see them. In fact, I would be very eager.
This was so so so interesting to read! The first two verses and I was already hooked. Normally, I'm not one for poetry that has a specific rhyme and pattern, but this is definitely an exception. Each word fits so perfectly into place. And I LOVE the story in this. It actually reminds me of a story I wrote a year ago. A women was writing a book and she soon realized she was writing a book of her own life, of which of course she found out her death. And it ended like that. She died while writing.
But anyways, amaaaazing job dude. 100/100
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
That's awesome! I really thought you were going to put in how she manipulated the book of her life t.. read moreThat's awesome! I really thought you were going to put in how she manipulated the book of her life to her will, doing and dying anything and anyhow she wanted. That would be very neat. But thank you very much! Very nice review :)
NOOOOOOOOOO!!! And?????? Then what happened!?!?!?! Your on the last page and what Michael!!!! Good grief man, don't do that!!! Good write but you really need to continue!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Lol thanks haha xD That's an interesting idea though, continuing it with another poem. But I love th.. read moreLol thanks haha xD That's an interesting idea though, continuing it with another poem. But I love that sort of tease and mystery within my work too ;p Thank you so much for the review.
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