Sexual Desires

Oh...

Tongues scraping at each other’s flesh

She bears down with mortal needs

More than that she craves?

Demonic inception’s plead.

 

Composed of sexual desires

She kisses flaming skin

His grasp hard on her hips

Incubus in thrall with sin

 

Her mortal attractions are no more

Sin is her only wish

A few minutes of delight

She feeds a simple kiss

 

Soul drains out like sand

Unraveling in his bliss

Her heart is gone again

No redemption, it’s his.

 

Blinded and chained she moans away

All her dirty thoughts

An endless stream of content

As her body rots.

 

 

Reviews

[That_Girl]

So, let me get this straight.

1. Michael complains about the "old-lady-s****y-so-called-smut-I-never-want-to-read-again-Avy-should-come-back" BS.

2. Michael writes a pretty damn decent "dark erotic" poem.

3. Michael DOESN'T tell his friend, Avy (me, in case you forgot).

YOU HAVE ACCESS TO MY BLEEPING PHONE AND YOU DON'T MENTION THIS?!?!?! Wow. Just wow.

[Michael Thrower]

I was actually writing this to mock the old lady s****y smut or w/e, lol xD But I did forget to tell you... I'M SORRY! D:

[Michael Thrower]

My authors note used to be "F**k you". But I thought that was too mean.

[That_Girl]

Yeah well, f**k you too. OMFG GO LOOK AT YOUR GODDAMN KIK I'M OUT OF MY MIND NERVOUS!

[Michael Thrower]

ilyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[That_Girl]

Love you too, babe. :*

[Michael Thrower]

AVY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[mhaie]

I don't know what to write her. Well anyway, it sounds Great!

[Red Brick Keshner]

What guy can compete with an incubus to ravish a girl and what girl can compete with a succubus at seducing a guy! Your angle and approach is innovative and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.

[Michael Thrower]

Lol thanks. It was actually about a girl's sex addiction. But yeah, nice perception. Thanks again :D

[Red Brick Keshner]

Yeah, got that... after which my mind switches on to over drive & gets very random. haha...

[Ari]

i really like this poem. it's different and just creepy in a good way. awesome job!

[Michael Thrower]

Lol well thanks ;p

[Frieda P]

You're such a sassy smartass but you give good bondage wrapped in a scintillating escapade of lust.

'As her body rots'

Not my favorite happy ending. And up yours too.

[Michael Thrower]

Lmao, thank you so much Frieda xD Glad you liked ;) I should have named this poem something else... Like Demonopheliac.

[Britt]

Well then. f**k you too.:P but good poem. Thanks for sharing with me. :)

[Michael Thrower]

Lmfao, thank you thank you xD

[Britt]

:)

[Androglossia]

Now I have a good idea what to do, I can just practice and get better and better at it:) Thank you for a very stimulating write!

(Sorry, my mom doesn't allow me to say F**k you too.. )

[Michael Thrower]

Lmao get better at what? Writing or f*****g demons? Hahaha, thank you.

[Androglossia]

Both?

[Michael Thrower]

"Now I have a good idea what to do, I can just practice and get better and better at it:)" What is IT?

[Androglossia]

Oh boy.. you only gave two options, writing or f*****g demons. Go over my writings when you have time and tell me if I still need to learn more from your writings. If you think I no longer need to then that leaves me with one option, lol.

[Androglossia]

And I guess the latter is easier than learning how to write:)

[Michael Thrower]

Lmao, well then... I had no intentions of finding someone interested in having demonic intercourse by suggestion of my poem. Not one bit.

[Androglossia]

O, you really never know what a single line can do, haha.. Anyway, good write!

[Michael Thrower]

Lol thank you and thank you for the review :p

[Androglossia]

You're welcome!

[KAOlmsted]

F**k you, too.

Well done, Michael...I like the tip of the hat to bondage in the second stanza ;-) Then again...I would, yeah? *laugh*

Thanks for sharing this with us.

[Michael Thrower]

Lmao, I was curious as to what people would say about the author's note xD Hahaha, oh yes, that good ol bondage. Psh, oh Kimmer ;)

Not a problem, thanks for wasting your valuable time in reading this ;)

[KAOlmsted]

Been in a thrall or two myself, you know ;-) (always consensual *laugh*)

Anyway...thank you for recognizing my time is valuable and for acknowledging it was wasted here xD Silly boy. I love reading you. Never ever stop writing, and, more importantly, never ever stop RR-ing me ;-)

xoxo

[Michael Thrower]

Lmao well thank you! I am overwhelmed with happiness right now. You're always so inspiring. You're one good reason I still write ;) Also why I've been (unfortunately) leaning towards all that erotic stuff. ;) Haha, glad you like it though < 3

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Whoa this is intense and full of rage. Brilliantly written.

[Michael Thrower]

Hahaha thank you < 3

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :-)

[Tasha]

Oh wow Michael, I love the way you write. It is so bold and full of life like this piece. Keep it up I will keep reading.

[Michael Thrower]

Well thank you Tasha, that means a lot. It really does.

[Tasha]

Its always a pleasure :)