One Call

What would you do?

I know it's late but I just couldn't wait any more

Had to call tonight to tell what has to be said 

Rebecca is dead and I had everything to do with it 

The both of you were in the park when I saw her

I got her to trust me in time and you weren't watching 

Two weeks later I made a mask out of her skin

Ate the rest and that was all to the deed I have done

If you want to find her remains then I will tell you

Just don't speak of hang up, just listen to me 

She is buried in the nearby woods by the park

Also don't try to find me because I will be far one 

Don't worry cause I will do this again until I die

There were more before her and will be plenty after

She didn't suffer or was in pain at all in any way

I put her down nice and easy so please don't worry

I assure you I won't hurt you at all and this is from me

Well this is the end so please take care and goodbye

Author's Note

Did this make sense? Was it going to far?

Reviews

[C. Rose]

*of hang up
*far one

The beginning made me think it was going to be a love confession or a normal apology. I was startled by the sudden dark turn. I like that although the perspective is from a crazy killer, he is somewhat polite and apologizing and comforting.

You might consider clarify if the POV character is apologizing for killing or for having to leave the body alone or some twisted killer logic.

[Michael Phillips]

Thanks for commenting and pointing out the typos! I will certainly tweak this more soon

[Symphonic_Sunflowers]

I like how he's this crazy guy who killed this chick and wore her face as a mask and he's talking to who ever is on the other end and is so calm and comforting - which makes it that more darker, in my opinion.
I liked this one :)