What You Need

Another reject from Jack

                                               He is what you want

                                               I am what you need

                                               He is what you want

                                               I am what you feed

                                               He is what you want

                                               The signs I can read

                                               He is what you want

                                               I am what you bleed

                                               He is what you want

                                               I want to make a seed

                                               He is what you want

                                               I will no longer plead

Author's Note

Well do you like?

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

It's never easy to see the ones we want to after the wrong people. When in our hearts, we feel that the deserve us, would be more happy with us. We want to tell him that we could be right ones to never hurt them, to always be there and love them, but would the think us crazy? Sometimes, we must trust our instincts and dive into pouring out our feelings and just seeing how things turn out.

[Michael Phillips]

Thank you for the review and the friend request! I just posted a new one called connect not even a hour ago! Would you like to check it out?

[I Am Svetlana]

You're welcome! And yes, I'll check it out in a minute before I head to bed.

[Stephen]

Yeah, I like but not that much .. because the line "He`s what you want" just freaking annoying me indeed so, this poem could be in this way ..

He`s what you want
I`m what you need
He`s what you haunt
I`m what you feed
He`s what you grant
I`m what you leave
He`s what you plant
I`m what you seed
Cus..
If he`s what you want ..
I`d really no longer bleed

That`s all from my perceptions or according to my ways .. Anyway, Skinny .. keep writing!

[Michael Phillips]

Thanks for the review! Can't always knock em out of the park! ;)

[Stephen]

Pleasure! Lol ;)

[Mila]

This is a very interesting poem! I thought it was very nice and can be construed in many different ways. Consistency lacked in a few lines, especially in the one starting with "the", but it wasn't anything to throw off the cadence of it, so I don't even know why I'm mentioning it (don't listen to me... :p). I enjoyed it; good work on the writer's part!

[Jay dee]

Very interesting indeed I see good and evil, and the battle there within

[Michael Phillips]

Thank You!

[Jack Kennedy]

Interesting... Very Interesting!

[Michael Phillips]

I'm glad you're enjoying yourself... ;)