What You Need

Another reject from Jack

                                               He is what you want

                                               I am what you need

                                               He is what you want

                                               I am what you feed

                                               He is what you want

                                               The signs I can read

                                               He is what you want

                                               I am what you bleed

                                               He is what you want

                                               I want to make a seed

                                               He is what you want

                                               I will no longer plead

Author's Note

Well do you like?

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

It's never easy to see the ones we want to after the wrong people. When in our hearts, we feel that the deserve us, would be more happy with us. We want to tell him that we could be right ones to never hurt them, to always be there and love them, but would the think us crazy? Sometimes, we must trust our instincts and dive into pouring out our feelings and just seeing how things turn out.

[Michael Phillips]

Thank you for the review and the friend request! I just posted a new one called connect not even a hour ago! Would you like to check it out?

[I Am Svetlana]

You're welcome! And yes, I'll check it out in a minute before I head to bed.

[M Boblett]

Yes, I like the poem. It speaks truthfully of somebody in a relationship where another is desired, but still living with individual despite knowing the situation. Well phrased.

[Mizo4]

nice write
strong emotive impact in the poem.

[Michael Phillips]

Thanks a ton!

[michele vera]

Very Great Poem! Well written too. It sounds to me like You know You Just Might be the One. It is if You are stating That this Girl Truly Loves You. I enjoyed this Poem. It was Rhythmatic also

[Michael Phillips]

The writer thanks you for the review! I also thank you for stopping by and reviewing!!

[michele vera]

Your Very Welcome! I Look Forward To Future Writes!

[Michael Phillips]

I'm getting one sent in at and posted at midnight! It by the same person who made this one! If you enjoythem then he has his own profile as well! Thank you again

[michele vera]

Awesome! Looking Forward to It.

[Heath Mindy]

ohh sounds gory I no like gory. sorry. Not my style -or heart -still your thinking to share in pen.

[Michael Phillips]

What is gory about it? Did you understand it? Well thanks for stopping by!

[Girl With A Pen]

Wonderful structure, great style, and repetition. A great read :)

[Michael Phillips]

Thank you very much but me personally I like trilogy better but you might disagree....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we often don't appreciate what is right in front of us...we always want more...

but often times that elusive one turns out to be a disappointment....and when we turn around...the one who really loved us is gone.

as sheryl crow sang "it's not needing what you want, it's wanting what you've got"

bravo on this piece.
the repetition of that line really gives this perfect symmetry.

[Michael Phillips]

Wow I'm glad you liked it! Also thanks for the wise words as well! Always nice to get advice from someone as yourself! All respect due

[Madison O'Dwyer]

A tight structure often leaves little for imagination, but I thought this was eloquently executed. Well done :)

[Brook]

I think is unique, and wonderfully written. It shows that what we want overpowers everything else! Even if it's what is best for us. Good job!

[Michael Phillips]

Thanks for the review! Jack Kennedy wrote this so if you would like more then head over to his profile for more :)

[Wynter Ignatius]

I feel this as I have lived this - the shoulder to cry on only to watch women I know go back to abuse, boys who don't appreciate them and the such. I've long wondered if I should put my paladin ways to bed as they have not served me too well over time.

[Michael Phillips]

That writer is ready to claim his work now! He is greatful for the review and so am I!
Would you like to read Trilogy? If you do then it'son my profile as well! Thank you

[Wynter Ignatius]

I will tomorrow - near the end of my first job day and I'll be tied up till tomorrow afternoon but it is on my calendar for review. Gave it a quick once-over and it looks interesting but proper read time is not available right now.

[Michael Phillips]

I understand! Well good day or night (depending on where you are) and take care