Trilogy

This was written by Jack Kennedy!! Go to his profile for more of his work!

"Glass Table Girl"

A rush of euphoria

As white lines enter

My body starts to shiver

Adrenaline bursts through

An addiction for you I grew

A taste of your feeling I have

You are always something new

The way you lay on my glass table

The way you excite my mind

The way you fulfill my needs

You are to me the ultimate pleasure

All over my gums I rub you

All in my brain I snort you

You are my glass table girl

Never will you leave me alone

Always here forever and more

Glass Table Girl

                                           "What You Need"

                                 No need for perfume spray

                                What I have you can't smell

                                Just mix the codeine in the cup

                                 I have my girl on the glass table

                                 You can have some of her if you want

                                Don't be shy, just ask

                                She nor I will bite unless you want

                                I have it all just for us tonight

                                Usually here at all the parties,

                                To pluck the feathers of bird

                                But something else is craved

                                You don't have to beg me please

                                I got it girl, I got it girl, I got it

                                I have exactly what you want

                                I have exactly what you need

"The Morning (Coming Down)"

It is only the morning after

Already I can see disaster

The hangovers are consuming

The mistakes are now looming

The highs have came down

In the shame I could drown

You were important for one night

Now I don't even want you in sight

You have stayed a little too long

I knew you were the same old song

Only wanted my drugs and money

Don't cry now; You're nose is runny

No more foolish wicked games

I can see the fake in your claims

All I need is my glass table girl

Now leave me be with my pearl

Reviews

[Stephen]

Glass Table Girl?? Sounds freaking awesome .. I like the beats .. the whole poem was going good but in the last, you just twist off every-thing .. like writing these lines ..

Only wanted my drugs and money
Don't cry now; You're nose is runny

It expressing here a but s****y .. it`s not spreading the aromas of love but a one night stand lust, to be honest. But if I take it from diff. perspective .. like a creepy one then yeah, it`s a very horny piece where I find a truth of the world somehow because as we all know .. Drugs, love and sex uplifting in the world very high so .. it`s a poem which showing the truth ..the mirror of reality .. that`s all .. but the ending`s not what as it should be .. but anyway .. not that bad.

If you`d have turned the ending replacing the lines ..

Only wanted my drugs and money
Don't cry now; You're nose is runny

With ..

Only wanted my love and my money
Don`t lament on last night.. I`'ll make you my honey

Then it`d have shown the real love feelings instead of the s****y one ... anyway ...it`s just an opinion. I just appreciated whatever you`ve penned here. Just try to convert every bad thing into good .. in other words, try to convert the feelings of lust into a kind words bringing a beautiful poem..because kindness and simplicity is what make or bring what? A "Trilogy" .. so, be optimistic about love, lust and of course about crush .. Keep writing!

[Michael Phillips]

The last one is actually unfinished and from the news it looks like it won't be finished no time soon :(
Thanks for the review!

[Stephen]

Why you freaking sad about the last one ..huh .. let`s make it end right now ..right here ..c'mmon .. I give a stanza . . . in a new review and if you find that one as a great ending then you can paste it on your poem ... got it! I hope you got it! And yeah .. your welcome!

[Michael Phillips]

Sure! If you can handle it ;)

[Stephen]

I can handle everything, champ. You bring some hope to handle me & my words. Stay blessed!

[Jack Kennedy]

Woah that would be cool if you finished my poem for me. I was so mad when I accidently deleted that verse! Well thanks michael for posting my trilogy about cocaine, sex and money! Thanks also for believing that it was good when I didn't! Much appreciated and thank you Stephen for adding a last verse (if you do it).

[Stephen]

Champ ..I`ve already done it.. check it out again on this pages and scroll the reviews .. I`ve given two reviews here and in the IInd one ..i`ve completed your poem or made some last stanzas ..so, if you like then you can add and if not then .. just enjoy the stanzas i`ve written for ya ... helping you out .. Anyway, thanks for the appreciation. Take care!

[Mila]

This is really, really good! I'm glad you shared it with us; the person who wrote this has a great talent!

[Michael Phillips]

Thank you! They and I appreciate it a ton

[Sami Khalil]

You talent oozes through your words. You crave poetry as you carve your name upon it. Bravo................

[Michael Phillips]

The writer is grateful of your feedback! I'm sure they truly appreciate it!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).........................

[s y e]

This is very good with lots of good imagery and wording. Whoever the writer is very talented and I sure he/she would be very happy here at WC. Again, I loved this.

[Michael Phillips]

Thank you and the writer is already on. He/she just didn't like this one so they're 'disowning' it for the time being but thanks I'm sure they appreciate it and needed the confidence boost!

[Michael Phillips]

I should also mention that the third poem has a 'lost' fifth verse so its unfinished!