Wishing With Reason

The things left unsaid...

 

 

I'll never speak to you.

You'll never see me.

Even though you fear me.

I'll never disturb you.

Even though I LOVE YOU.

I would never hurt you.

Never again can I have you.

In all this time I have lost you.

Wondering why you left.

Wishing I had your reason.

Never getting answers.

Wanting you desperately to be mine.

This is my demise.

Fucked in a relationship of mine.

You would never listen.

Your mind is already made up.

What could I do.

Maybe this is for the best.

Even though I don't see it the way you do.

How could this have happened???

Can't stand life with you.

But I feel empty without you.

I am on the other side of the rainbow.

Everything is black and white,

and has no meaning.

 

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Reviews

[Pema Dorje]

your Poetic imagery is as clear as the Photo's you've chosen to accentuate the piece ... the longing for more lingers from your pen, an ache for the beloved again and again ...

Neither the voice that speaks shall have your Heart
nor can you hear that uncommenest of tongues;
... for the language of the Soul is silence ...
You shall know when you have been unspoken,
you will feel it Divine!
Peace is that wordless cry ... happy holidays Michael my new friend

[The]

I think this poem admittedly is vague enough that people can relate to it and perhaps even imagine themselves in their own scenarios, but I don't know that the imagery is specific enough that I am able to precisely feel your pain.

[Cece]

that gives you new meaning to addiction all the definition of addiction its apparent you have withdraws

[Paula M. Potter]

Very well put expression of pain I liked this read. The imagery was very fitting too.

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This was wonderful. Very true. The imagery is awesome. The song fits very well. I enjoyed reading this piece very much. Great Job! ^_^

[Rhonda]

This peice is very real and honest.

Good job.

[Chris Zahar]

My absolute favorite lines are "even though I LOVE YOU I would never hurt you". Such beautiful irony. The pictures go beautifully with the poem even though I would've probably chosen another song, but that's just me.