Abyss Of The World

Lost emotions,

living in previous convictions.

Setting aside my madness.

Wanting the night to engulf my sadness.

The delightful bliss,

setting my mind on fire.

Don't need your sympathy,

and never regretting.

Can't afford any errors,

I'm living my last stand.

Up in the gorgeous night.

Streetlight twilight,

all this pretty fun.

Life is so rude.

Accepting my responsibility.

Refusing to become society.

Wanting to be just myself.

It's difficult as I pursue my future.

It's just a mystery even to me.

I can't help but stand against this world.

Once I've departed.

There's no turning back.

Like being lost at sea.

Swimming in my thoughts,

and drowning in life’s problems.

A unfound paradise,

destination nowhere.

Walking my final sunset.

My fate is to overcome.

What I once known.

A stranger to life.

Like angel wings beating in the night.

Feel the beat of the rhythm.

Dancing into Ecstasy,

bodies feeling vibrations,

excitement,

stimulation.

It's so tragic being in these streets.

I Am On the bottom of the abyss of the world.

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Reviews

[Dakota]

wow, i like it. sounds really good.

[Eve]

it feels like being over run by the human race, just when you think it is a hopeless cause, someone helps an old lady across the street and we get a repreive for the day :)

[Jaded Perception]

I love this. To you just a jumble of your thoughts,I know...Put together perfectly though. I heard every word.

[Kaykay]

very good I love it very emotional

[Str8jacket]

This poem is so powerful. I think it's great how it conveys the struggle of life.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful presentation and a very good though mystifying poem in parts..I love the line I can't help but stand against
the world ... love it though it is a mystery..

Chloe
xoxo

[Porcelain Doll]

i am in love with your poems. they are like dead feeling in a washing machine. they toss and turn and are made clean cause you're so straight forward with what you want to get across. SUPER COO!!!!!!!!!

[Coral]

interesting!

[C.m.v]

I think this is great! Very original and well written. There are alot of parts on here that I thought "wow, beautiful wording".

[Amanda Crandall]

I think it sounds great, I like it, particularly
Even though it's just a mystery,
even to me.
I can't help but stand against this world.
thats one of those line you wake up the next morning and go "did I write that?" and be proud that, yes, yes you did ^^