Vanished

just haven't posted anything in a while... hope u review.

 Dreams that never conceive.

my moments in love, 

die with your hearts desire.

my hope is belief,

that you and I will coincide.

my lonely world,

with smoke filled rooms.

waiting for a stranger,

just to get my thrill.

hoping you wont forget about me,

that you stand there and stare.

i will not fall,

that my heart cries out.

hoping that i can believe, 

in what that it is you need.

dreams never die .

thats why i believe in your love.

it keeps my hope alive.....

Reviews

[Rahul]

Nicely penned, i loved your theme. words're powerful and suited in every line.100

[Rahul]

Nicely penned, i loved your theme. words're powerful and suited in every line.100

[Pradnya]

yeah i guess its right that dreams are the only things in this world who never dies, so do hhope lives on, this poem is just so fantastic, thanks a ton actually for shairng such a wonderful work

[Brianna Brie]

dreams never die .
thats why i believe in your love.
it keeps my hope alive.....

There is longing to be loved felt within these lines. Nicely expressed.

[Magdelena]

Nicely done, words bring forth faith. I like that.. Also the meaning behind this.. well done

Mags xx