Teased

missing dreams that never were...

Our passions,

that go into the night...

They pass us by,

like our hopes and dreams.

That the good bye kisses is all we recieve.

 

With the beat,

that life brings...

Only to see the doors are closing.

But my thoughts go on,

as your day goes along...

 

With our time lacking in moments.

A heart fell on what it was fond of.

That our passion kisses teased our time.

With your touches being like whispers to my skin.

 

With this story,

so deep in my heart...

I wonder why,

life is so scattered.

With love so close to grasp,

that I dont want you to end so soon.

 

All I'll have is a fond  memory...such as this.

 

A passionate thought...

with a blissfull taste...

A forgotten place,

for the heart to be placed.

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

really soothing to the heart..
gives nice floe to it..
i can easily relate to it..
nice write:)

[Revolutionary]

Love it.It is hard to look back n a lost love and remember the good things.the happiness.the poem flows without alot of filler words.smooth

[Mary]

Mic!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. Haven't been here in a while....I sooo love this one! Especially the last stanza...reading it over and over. ;)

[justice]

I really like this poem! Wow. Such emotion, such passion. It is a look into the heart of another human being, that is special. You are a fantastic capturer of thought and emotion. THank you so much for allowing me to read this!
J

[SilentDreamer]

Love this. Nothing wrong with it at all. It is at its best as far as I can see.

[Mary E. Green]

I love this poem!

[Shellie]

I actully really enjoyed this. Its tone is dreamy but genuine emotion. Its lovley, phrases are really good esp 'A forgotten place, for the heart to be placed' I really like that and its a great ending.