Teased

missing dreams that never were...

Our passions,

that go into the night...

They pass us by,

like our hopes and dreams.

That the good bye kisses is all we recieve.

 

With the beat,

that life brings...

Only to see the doors are closing.

But my thoughts go on,

as your day goes along...

 

With our time lacking in moments.

A heart fell on what it was fond of.

That our passion kisses teased our time.

With your touches being like whispers to my skin.

 

With this story,

so deep in my heart...

I wonder why,

life is so scattered.

With love so close to grasp,

that I dont want you to end so soon.

 

All I'll have is a fond  memory...such as this.

 

A passionate thought...

with a blissfull taste...

A forgotten place,

for the heart to be placed.

Reviews

[Pradnya]

wow! amazing thought and brilliantally expressed

[Magdelena]

Wow, now this was brilliant! I adored the imagery inside your words.. Fab work

Mags xx

[Winslow Des Totes]

Melancholy but beautiful :D Also, nice choice in diction and syntax; made me feel deeply for the lonely soul! :D Great job!

Wow this is really amazing, such deep emotion. Wonderfully expressed!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Description and story was outstanding. Thank you for the very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Jesse N. Wall]

yeah, i've felt that. that's what it feels like.
the final sentence says it

[Brianna Brie]

All I'll have is a fond memory...such as this.
A passionate thought...
with a blissful taste...
A forgotten place,
for the heart to be placed.

I love the last verse. It says it all.

[Sunni Davis]

This is soulful and heartfelt with a very nice flow. I enjoyed reading it.

[Michelle Grayson]

This was wonderful! It's hard when all we have is memories of something grand. You capture the heartache and soulful longing that defines the loss of love.

MG

[Gone]

Delightful read! lovely flowing style, packed with emotion. I'm not into the romantic stuff but this poem actually resonates with me.