Rain Clouds

just another rainy day.... oh its very short.

The dark clouds roll...

while the rain wash's the day by.

 

the strands of light that cascade...

with you standing center.

 

when fluttering hearts stutter...

your touch makes my day stop.

 

love splashes our day...

while we caress and confess.

 

with our story never ending...

our silhouettes dance into the night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I am waiting for this supposed rain at this very moment so it can possibly wash away this death of heat and bring in some cooler air so I can feel stable again. The rain makes me strong and it helps clear my head after a long day, plus I love the breeze it brings along as its companion. There are many reasons for a rainfall, but rain and really anything for that matter is able to have a deeper meaning...we just need to look for it.

[Eve]

I would kill for some simple rain right now, just a smidgon to water the poor yard.
Love this poem, it's very romantic especially the last two lines, I love the feel of nevering ending.

[qaralynn]

love the poem!!

[:)]

It sounds like rainy days are welcomed in your household.
These are beautiful thoughts.

[Michelle Grayson]

Oh! This was so romantic! Two lovers in the rain enjoying the energy shared between themselves as well as that of mother nature! I loved this! :D

MG

[Gone]

You have a very good way of expressing emotion in this poem. I especially like the way you open with the dark clouds then quickly change your focus onto your beloved and then straight in with your feelings for her. BTW I agree with Thea and Shellie. Won't repeat their words ;)

[Thea Fuentebella]

I don't like poems much. but i honestly think this is a good one:) might i suggest you make the first lines more..."explosive" or intriguing. that way you can grab the reader's attention immediately.

[Shellie]

With a dance in the rain feel yet written without the commonly used phrase; this was a breath of fresh air. Each and every line was decilately and masterfully placed.