Dreaming

Dreaming

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

just a dream fix...

"

Laying here...

My eyes are closed...

Yet you seem so far away.

 

Broken heart...

Fragile feelings...

That I believe you are my dream.

 

Breathing...

Dreaming...

Realizing that I'm awake.

That I see a picture of you and me.

 

Understanding the pitch...

Filming lives...

That pass us by.

I dont want to believe in your lies.

 

Like the icicles that drip...

my emotions quiver to the thought....

That you were once a dream.

© 2010 Michael Lopez


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The dream that is life, but this sounds more like a nightmare. The way I see it a nightmare doesn't have to be about monsters or ghosts, but about whatever makes you sad, whatever makes you angry or scared when you're alone. WAIT! That gives me a great idea for a poem. Thank you for the inspiration! This is a really great piece that you've written and I love it.

Nae-Nae...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 1, 2009
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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

Houston, TX



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