My Trigger

My Trigger

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

a mood sets, and pays a toll...

"

A snipers secret kiss...

Queit as a candles whisper,

it's even felt when I'm not around.

That I'm living your last moments,

 With you falling to the ground...

© 2009 Michael Lopez


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Gorgeous. I love the little rhyme as well.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So short, but those words said so much. Living through someone else's destruction or even fate is difficult to handle. I really enjoyed this and the idea of being a sniper, never too close and never far enough.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 1, 2009

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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

Houston, TX



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