Ashes

Ashes

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

its short...

"

A autumn leaf falls

And in spring like a phoenix

From death is reborn

© 2009 Michael Lopez


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beautiful. only word usable.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very short, but very good. Cool cool cool :) But I think its supposed to be An* Autumn (: Over all very good :D
♥Kimmi

Posted 15 Years Ago


the changing of the seasons.... pretty cool......

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A haiku! Well, I believe this piece is about renewal. By the way, you might want to change the article "A" (in the first line) to "An" since the next word "autumn" starts with a vowel. Nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow nice

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 6, 2009
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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

Houston, TX



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