Free To Decide

inspired cranberry...

Your just stiting there,

and I'm just standing here...

My mind wonders why,

my truth lives in a lie...

That you decide to believe in this suicide.

 

After all hands don't preach,

without you dying inside...

I learn the hurt your thinking,

and leave a life behind...

To understand why,

and to choose a better side of this wondering.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

O.M.G.

That was great... Does this stuff just flow from your head? It's just so very... smooth... I totally love this contemplation thing you've got going on here. I really think that's what makes your poem a little different than your other pieces that go along the lines of suicide, or Death, in general.

Thanks for sharing this, Michael! This was really awesome. It brought back memories. :)

Eternally Yours, Blade and Blood

[Lydia]

Really beautifully written, with such a great flow and touching emotion. Although, both "your"s in this poem should be "you're"s... that's the only thing I found wrong with it :) Great write.

[Victoria Harlequin]

Wow, I enjoyed this piece.
Nicely done ^_^

[Flow~]

Good write ... I see you enjoy the edgy writing which usually gets us all to think. I will never understand suicide but ... I enjoyed this peice looking in from the person watching another.