Memoirs

i think its all fuct up.....ill fix later

Hoping to feel your heart beat next to mine....

That I dream to believe....

With another night,

that I play into the day.

Seeing your face in dreams that fade.

 

My unconditional heart's confesion is given.

With some memories being shared,

My heart flares,

By the choice that is dared.

 

Hearing your voice when I dream.

That these are the feelings that are fleeting.

with all the dreaming that I'm dreaming.

And hoping is never forgetting.

my temperary piece of heaven.

That passes with tear drops falling,

And the bells ringing.

Seeing yourf ace across a page.

That I dare not take up space,

Or even come to your place to let you know

Before someone else takes my place.

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

Nope,
I don't see any errors.
This is a wonderful poem.
You are great with feeling.
Great Job!