Temptation

Temptation

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

Will my mind ever shut up....

"

You have pained my mind...

For quite some time now...

Not being a bad thing...

Just a hard thing to get use to.

 

Being with your replacment.

That I sit here....

And think of you.

Dancing the night away...

In the various ways.

 

The temptation...

 Isn't somthing that I live by.

But getting high....

Keeps my stakes high...

While I live in my lie.

 

Only to watch myself...

 Slowly lose my mind.

Just becuase...

I can't be with you.

© 2008 Michael Lopez


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This is written beautifully
good work
=]


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Temptation isn't somthing that I live by...
But getting high.
Keeps my stakes high...
While I live in my lie.
And watch myself slowly lose my mind ...
Becuase I can't be with you."

Those last lines really hit home for me. Its beautiful, and sad..
Wonderful poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 3, 2008
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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

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