Puddles

A day-dream...

As I wish...

                Upon my sadness.

I watch the rain.

As it lies around...

My love puddles.

Feeling it overwhelm me.

As if it never wants to make sense.

To Why the tears fall...

Is never seeing it in your eyes.

that I'll fall for a dream...

Only to live in reality.

And when I blink my eyes...

I watch it fade.

Reviews

[Taji Herbert]

I'll fall for a dream...
Only to live in reality.

I definately understand that it is an easy thing to do loved the poem!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hi Michael, this is a bit melancholy ... wishing upon sadness rather than a star .. will this get a person far, who knows? ..rain making 'love puddles'..i like that, 'love puddles' wishing for a dream to come true.. we all do .. nice one..

Chloe

Good luck in the contest~