Lazy Dayz

Lazy Dayz

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

enya inspired dont ask why....

"

 On these clouded days,

that seem to just roll out of bed.

 

How I love these...

                     lazy dayz.

 

When the rain blesses,

             us when she want too.

 

I just stroll on through........

             A little faded,

                               And motivated just enough.

That I realize.

                    I havn't even gotten out of bed yet!!!

© 2008 Michael Lopez


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Oh, I hate it and love it at the same time when I do that. I'll glance over at the clock and realize it's around 9AM, thinking that with just a few moments of mental preparation I'll get up and get dressed. Then, two hours later, I realize I've been daydreaming about nothing at all and have consequentially wasted my entire morning. Oh well. At least the daydreams are always good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh yeah, I think everyone knows how this feels. I hate having to get up after a five hour night of sleep. :( This poem is awesome though! I really admire how you made the tone, sort of, drag on; just so fitting. lol!

"When the rain blesses,/us when she want too." --That's a great line! It's as if the weather's gotten lazy too-possibly a metaphor for human laziness? Who knows? I'm too lazy to figure it out.

So, yeah, great work! I really enjoyed reading it. ^^

Eternally Yours.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, I hate it and love it at the same time when I do that. I'll glance over at the clock and realize it's around 9AM, thinking that with just a few moments of mental preparation I'll get up and get dressed. Then, two hours later, I realize I've been daydreaming about nothing at all and have consequentially wasted my entire morning. Oh well. At least the daydreams are always good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 6, 2008

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