Lost

Lost

A Poem by Michael Lopez
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When all else fails...

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I can't find my way

Unable to fight these thoughts

No matter where I go

The darkness seems to find me

The worse always seems to come out

No matter all the good I have

These are the feelings inside of me

Sorry but I can't find my way

Being in this all alone

Never seeing the light

I am all wasted in a sense

Wanting so much more

That I'm never going to be right

Please GOD show me my dreams

I am wanting it more than anything in this world

This is all I ever wanted

Can I ever reach my sanity

This is how its always going to be

© 2008 Michael Lopez


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Ari
I would suggest, as far as form goes, that you invert your background and text, and make them something a bit more normal. It really hurts my eyes to read this, and I'm not just saying that. It actually hurts. If you want people to read this an comment, it's just something to think about.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on July 27, 2008

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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

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