This Is My Reply

hoping the salvation will come....

All I ever put in

Is never enough

Is there anything I can do

Where do I draw the line

I see myself fading away

Unable to return

Wanting so much more than this

Am I ever going to be worth it

Never receiving a reply

Just being true to myself

Never wanting to hurt you

In the end I fucked everything up

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Ooh, intense. It seems to me like it's a personal poem... I can totally imagine many people relating to this piece because I'm sure everyone has that person that they feel inferior to. :P That's a sucky feeling, but bottom line: You delivered the message excellently and the profanity made it stronger... lol Never use euphemisms... unless it's unnecessary of course. HAHAHA!

Nice job, buddy. Like always. ^^

Eternally Yours, Blade and Blood