Moonlight Shadows

Started out as a vampire story...but im thinkin of a revise to a poem

The steady sound of rain bathing the forest.

The darkness of the forest is very calming,

traveling after the midnight hour has always been very tranquile.

The coldness and the shadows that the moonlight creates as it beams through the trees like her counter-part the sun,

it's always a sight to see. I am not far from my destination. The reason for my being here in such a late hour,

is all my own in which I'll reveal to you in time.

The unknown darkness within the abyss is thick.

The thought that I have no purpose is like poison in the mind.

My destiny has not yet revealed itself.

My path in this story is unknown but I know that their is alot to tell. I've been traveling for a good decade now.

I know the area where I was raised pretty well,

I have even traveled to nearby states.

I've come to know many faces,

in which some have names,

but as for friends I have none.

My time spent is mostly in the shadows of the night.

I am in my search for my way but all I have found is failure.

Failure in people,

failure in my country,

failure in the city I live in.

ll I have been taught is through reading books I've come in contact with and through the words of the ancients.

which shed light on my path.

Reviews

[Michael Lopez]

i wrote it in 15 minutes... it was long ago.

[Saki!]

Looking at Blade & Blood's review, I'm guessing this is suppose to be a vampire talking. Well while its incredibly well written, you've definitely caught my attention and clearly you put a lot of time into this.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Excellent imagery, here! Very impressive. You say it started out as a vampire story? If the narrator is still a vampire, then my, my... what an intriguing and intelligent vampire he or she is. ;) lol I think this is an excellent beginning to a really good vampire book. ^^

Ironically Yours.