Dark Realm

depressed write about a stupid chik circa 98'

Why Does All This Tend To Happen...

When All Is Well.

Only Then Disaster Strikes.

In An Instant Everything Changes...

Never Knowing...

Twisting...

And Turning...

When Is It Going To Stop.

Endless Like Time Itself...

Uncontrolable Space...

And The Confusion Doesn't Help.

Contacts Within This Realm Is All You Get To Work With.

And With That Can You Survive.

Sitting In this silence...

This Dense Air Is Killing Me.

My Minds Racing...

Thinking only The Worse Can Happen.

Blackness...

Eternal Dark...

The Realm Of Shadows...

In This Story Things never Happen.

I'm All Hazy Now...

These Thoughts Will Never Come.

Have You Forgotten Me.

The Surroundings Will Overcome Me...

Am I All Alone...

Can I Make It Right...

Don't Leave Me Behind.

I Rarely Come Here.

As I Watch From Your Face.

I Have No Fear...

Even Though You Don't Hear.

I can't Always Come...

When Your Never There.

All I Can Do Is Pretend...

That I AM  with You.

Now That I'm  Gone...

You Want Me There.

Why Do You Risk Your Life...

To Prove Me Wrong.

When I'm Just Right All Along.

Look Into My Eyes...

And Don't Lie To Yourself.

Help Me Understand Your Dreams...

 

 

Can I Last Forever With You Living Inside Of Me???

Reviews

[The]

I think this poem is difficult for me because even though the speaker is clearly suffering, I don't feel there is anything specific or precise enough to help me experience your suffering for myself. For example, "These Thoughts Will Never Come."

What thoughts? Give me something to picture for myself.

"The Surroundings Will Overcome Me.." What surroundings?

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Ooh, eerie. It seems like it's one of your strong points: sinister, deep poetry that usually involve a touch of love or romance. I like this very much. Sounds... authentic. ^^

BTW, have I read this before? It sounds very familiar...

Ironically Yours.