Death (Black)

A "haiku-like" poem about death

Grasping for a final breath.

 

Closing my eyes for a final time.

 

Sleeping in a blanket of darkness.

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

Now, this one is more dark, and depressing, but again very well done, and the sentiment was expressed with a bang. Thanks you for these fresh haiku's.

[beefjerky]

very, deathly... great write and keep it up!

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

lol... sinister...

Actually, this was pretty peaceful, just like Death, so you captured the feeling excellently. The first and second lines were very realistic... I think you want to manage writing because I had to highlight in order to find them, unless of course you already did. lol ;) The final line was pure classic! Eerie, too! ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood