Sniper

Sniper

A Poem by Michael Lopez
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a "haiku-like" poem

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Living Foilage, non-traceable round.

 

As blood paints a surreal backdrop.

 

Patience keeps its promise.

 

 

© 2009 Michael Lopez


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i love this poem, but the first line has 10 syllables when it's supposed to go 5- 7- 5, great write...

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree what inspired this piece, great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. What inspired this?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on July 10, 2008
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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

Houston, TX



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