Secret Kisses

love is waiting...

Under picnic willow shade.

A love is made.

Forbidden lover's triste.

As God's morning light,

rises to wake.

This moment is kept secret.

Only to live forever in our dreams.

 

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Garden-Tryst contest!

[Jessica Fox]

Another tantalizing piece, good job with the short sweet simple verses. Awesome imagery.

[Vanessa P]

A secret affair is always so exciting, but at the same time so hard and stressful to keep. I totally know what that's like. Nevertheless fun though :) A nice write you've got here...I hope love prevails on this one.