Girl

i think its a rhyme of some sort....

A cloud forest.

Shaped in the heavens.

As it passes...

 

I wish and wonder why?

She decided to leave instead of stay.

Hoping on this day her memory won't fade.

So I called and wanted some play.

But she kept me from having my way.

That is why I keep on floating away.

 

Reviews

[Cece]

cute rhythms should be
the girl as it should be
no you cant have your own way
and that is as it should be

[darkgurl]

This is just plain wonderful, I like this, it has a cuteness feel to it, well written.

[Lady Lazarus.]

this is magnificent.
feels like one of my diary enteries in a poem: kinda personal.
great poems are like that no matter how many people read them.
I adore it.