Mixed Paints

just a minor coherent mistake...

The remorse for life,

has left this world.

As I paint a life in a darker shade.

A remnant of a past forgotten.

 

The pain that rains...

In my heart.

As my sky begins to fall.

 Dusk breaks in early twilight.

As cloud canyons.

Are in pink champagne horizon's.

A Monet masterpiece revealed in realtime.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

This poem reminded me of romance in it's subtle tones.
Nice, vivid images. AD

[Sarah]

What brilliant use of color and description to paint a dark picture of the world. This is a depressing poem, and yet still fun to read. Very original. Great job. (: