Hidden Rainbow

just playing with the words.....

Its such a suprise.

When your running....

 

Hidding from such things.

Like this feeling of sadness.

 

The wanting of being rescued,

is like a dream and I can't even get that.

what am I suppoesed to do...

When their is no feeling left.

 

Hidden in this rainbow with no color.

And

What is left is all i know...

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a good poem that says a lot about you as a person, writer.
In this line: When their is no feeling left.....it should be there instead
of their. Good job...AD

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This is a really thought-provoking poem, yet it's so short! lol "Hiding from feelings of sadness"? Dude, you know better than I do that that's nearly (if not, completely) impossible. T.T Nice job!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood