Twisted Fate

i can't even see yet and i'm writing...its to fukin' early.

Dreams get shattered.

As a cloudy mind,

sets aside my happiness.

I regret what I think.

While my eyes say what I'm feeling...

There is no fight,

to those who are left.

As our seasons are spent waiting...

their are no chances to say "i love you".

With no love in my heart.

It's leaving me with no future.

While life stands still...

My love will still remain.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

You can love a person but not love who they are. This is the feeling I get from this poem.

The poem has a smooth flow to it, no forced words. I could just feel a lot of loneliness.

Good job!

[Kimmee Jean]

its sweet yet it has an edge to it...something sinsiter in the background...hmmm?

Risa jean

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

That was nice. ^^ Don't dreams almost always get shattered? :P This poem definitely has its dark side... I love it, like I love all of your work. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood