Lothlorien

For Rachel. a lost love... to this day i still think about.

A mystic forest of elvin lore.

The canopy being like your long tresses of brown.

Your eyes are like mirrored pools,

that reflect the deepest of souls.

With a beauty that captivates my mind.

 I venture deeper,

and find a love.

That wins with no contest.

But how my heart is blind.

When finding true love.

 

Desires that stimulate the soul.

With the butterflies you feel.

When your heart flutters.

It seems I lose myself in wonder.

As it slips through my fingers.

Author's Note

clouds float and you still wonder "what if"...

Reviews

[Picture of Poetry]

The poetic language in this piece is amazing. The discription is great, though the part even better than all of that is the talent of dicribing a place like this one. I adore the fist stanza, and the way that you ended it all was great too. Though a short piece, length is no matter at all here. It has every great quality that a poem should have, and flows so smoothly like a pebble. What a wonderful and passionate piece! Great poem!

:>O WOW!

[John Stussy]

Never thought that a poem like this would be able to be written off of a place like Lothlorien. A pleasant surprise, good poem.

[funkykarma]

you surprise me, describing familiar emotions in an unconventional way
*clapping*

[Maxinne Marie]

romantic.. i love the similes and metaphors!

eyes like mirrored pools..
when your heart flutters..

i love these lines:
As I venture deep,
I find a love.
That wins with no contest.
But how the heart is blind.
When finding true love.

=)

[Rachel]

I adore this poem. Thank you for such beautiful imagery and the fantastic quality it evokes. The song is a perfect fit and really adds something to the mood. Truly lovely.

[Raven Wilson]

I like this...I like it alot although I do not have the words to explain why....it just has a certain feeling to it when read.