Vampire's Kiss

2 x pills 1 hit of acid while rolling a blunt and this popped in me head...

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Death's cloak is upon me.

As his icey grip,

clutches my soul.

The pain just seems to fade away.

 

The vampire's lament...

 

Tasting flesh for the first time.

The forbidden kiss of eternal shame.

joining the damned.

Permament...

By your own choosing.

 

Reviews

[chris' girlfriend]

2 x pills 1 hit of acid while rolling a blunt and this popped in me head...
i love that ^_^ i seem to get very poetic when im high too :)
btw i love the way the music goes with the song

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I really like this .. love the blood suckers..
Chloe
xoxo

[Cece]

i wrote something familiar but mine said death dint make the pain fade good write

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Ooh, I love this poem. Awesome write!!!

Heather

[Megan]

Very nicely written, I feel temptation to join "the pain seems to just fade away" and I feel pity at the fate of what has become of the one who chooses to join.

[...Safiyah Black...]

'The forbidden kiss of eternal shame' I love this line.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

oh yeah! It's that poem I damn-near fell in love with! lol Vampires!!! I love it! The pics make it even better! ^^ Awesome job. :)

Ironically Yours, -Blade and Blood

[Paula M. Potter]

I like this one it was very nicely writen.

[Sabbath_Nikole]

short but all the more beautiful. You write some pretty amazing stuff, keep it up!

[Chelsea Alvarez]

I love this one!! vampire poems are one of my favorite kinds of poems, and yours was awesome! the way you wrote it put more feeling into it, and of course the music helps too!