© 2008 Michael Lopez


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Inbetween

Inbetween

A Poem by Michael Lopez
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The nightmare of reality...

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R E M and R A M.

Fighting over my dreams...

Eyes fluttering,

pulse is low.

Just wanting to slip into a coma.

The pictures that come alive.

Then seem to just fade away.

Only to be awaken by reality...

Living in the between is such a nightmare.

 
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Awake but asleep. Living but dying. Breathing but suffocating. I enjoy your poetry.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, I feel this one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THe thin line of life and death - to be or not to be.. fantasy or reality.. the themes of life do not get any simplier than this. well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful, great write. good music to go along.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A very powerful write Michael! The music was an added bonus. Nicely penned my friend...Hugz...Jillian

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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