This poem surprised me man, it read very well. I was never at a loss as to what you were saying, and from the short lines we got to describe female of the poem, I think it was enough to perfectly convey her thought process. I really enjoyed this poem, and think that it accurate to the real world in that of what women desire to some extent, but I am not an expert on women haha! The point is, I enjoyed this poem and thought it was very well written and well thought out.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Matt! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it, man. I just wanted to change the view of my stor.. read moreThanks, Matt! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it, man. I just wanted to change the view of my stories, for once hahaha.
This poem surprised me man, it read very well. I was never at a loss as to what you were saying, and from the short lines we got to describe female of the poem, I think it was enough to perfectly convey her thought process. I really enjoyed this poem, and think that it accurate to the real world in that of what women desire to some extent, but I am not an expert on women haha! The point is, I enjoyed this poem and thought it was very well written and well thought out.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Matt! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it, man. I just wanted to change the view of my stor.. read moreThanks, Matt! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it, man. I just wanted to change the view of my stories, for once hahaha.
Hello, my name is Michael G. Kelley (also known as "Michael Kikle" on YouTube). I love to write, yet struggle with continuing projects. I love to talk, so my YouTube channel is filled with thought vid.. more..